new poem!

[wnemedineme69me]

your ran your fingers down my tan, but naked side
As I gazed intently in your crystal ice blue eyes
You traced your fingers gently across my neck and face
then you bent to kiss me and fell into my embrace
As I'm still tasting your last daparting kiss
you placed your fingers soflty on my wet and quivering lips
then you started caressing the inside of my thighs
and you began undressing; letting out contented sighs.
I'm lying there waiting for you to enter in.
I lightly started quaking when you gave me the full 10.
Our bodies moved as one, what beautiful music we made,
then you're ready to come, you pulled my hair and pounded away.
your body engulfing mine was the last thing that I saw,
cuz I almost passed out from being fucked so raw.
:hot: :slurp: :fly:

[jseal]

wnemedineme69me,

I like the progression, as the poem moves from top to bottom and start to finish, of the words and their images.

[LixyChick]

It's a story with a beginning, middle and end.....but leaves me wondering........which is a good thing because there might be a sequel!

TY for sharing wnemedineme69me!

[wnemedineme69me]

thank you both for the nice things you said about my poem...and yes, they're probably will be a sequel...LOL..